looking for feedback on the serial

I’ve finished writing part seven of film noir the serial. My first reader has read it and approved. So now I ask, who among you will be kind enough to look over all (or even just some) of the seven parts and provide some feedback?
Each episode is less than four pages long and they’re screenplays so that’s not a dense four pages. Just reply here or email me at iwanttohelp at wackoproductions dot net. If you’re willing to look over the whole thing, I’ll even give you a nod in the credits. .